这个句子没有明显的语法错误,但是可以进行一些改进。例如: - "Only less than one-third"可以改为"Fewer than one-third",这样更符合习惯用法。 - "as they're addicted to playing computer games"可以改为"due to their addiction to playing computer games"或"because they are addicted to playing computer games",这样更准确地传达了原因与结果的关系。

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